Lecorth's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WoW: Car Ride]

Not bad, with a little work you could be gold.

Your humor is pretty good, your characters all seem to have personalities of their own, not just clones... You need to work on the sound a lot, a lot of the voices were too quiet compared to some of the others. Balance those out, refine your artwork a bit, maybe up the pace a bit and I'll give ya 5/5. Talk to the guys behind "Decline of Gaming" or at least look at their stuff for some goals for animation.

JAYDOTCOM responds:

Yeah, if they would even consider answering me, I would be extatic. Their level is my Aim =D. I have recieved lots of comments about voices so Im gonna make sure to MAKE my friends do better *shakes fist* hehe. TY for the review

[LR: Prelude]

I look forword to your shizzy!

Awesome, great to see someone doing something full out with flash.

Plus:
Great action sequences, good show of emotions, chicks with swords, good choice of music

Minus:
Need to work on proportions and anatomy, occasionally the music was louder than the words

Also, I noticed you had the same walking sound that half-life uses. Not really a bad thing, just felt like mentioning it. <.<

Keep it up!

[Falcon Love: The Movie]

Awesome work

Great song, I can relate. Great idea and it was pulled off well, only gripe was the animation was a little glitchy in parts, what with people bliping in and out in a scene or two. Not bad enough to detract from the song though. You, sir, have my props.

[Broken Saints Chapter 1]

Nice but slow

I'm afraid I don't have the patiance for this sort of slow moving dramatic read... I will admit that I didn't reach the end, I stopped it a little after the girl was admitting that there was something amiss on the island. From what I saw, it's got a lot of potential, I'll probobly come back later to watch the whole series and review again.

[Madness Depredation]

Nice, good natured bloody carnage as always

I must commend you on another well crafted insane brain-matter reducer. *clapclapclap* Encore! (the music wasn't quite as catchy as usual, though)

[Your First Game Tutorial]

I didn't have the patiance...

First of all, lets toss out the bad things. One, your vioce is too quiet, I couldn't hear what you said. Two, even if it was louder, the voice was rather low quality in the first place. Three, add subtitles or something and you may be able to skip both of the other two problems. As I said, I didn't have the patiance to sit through all of this, but aside from those problems, it seemed to be ok.

luminousnerd responds:

subtitles would take me several hours...not worth it to me. And my voice isn't too quiet...your speakers are too quiet. You can always turn them up. And yes, it's obviously low quality, I've said it before and I'll say it again: Until I get a donation of $50 to buy a new mic, I'll be using this low quality one that makes me sound like I have a friggin lisp

[Link's Problem]

Eh... it was ok

First of all, the text was too slow. Second, it was all hard to follow and as far as I could tell, really pointless. Nice sounds and sprite movement, though. Just work on plot and text and you're good to go.

[dp]

Nice pics... but whats the point?

I admire your skill in collecting images and playing a single song, but where exactly did you put the creativity? Did I miss that somewhere?